The tragic story of Urdu

By Raza Rumi

What makes translating Urdu literature a rare indulgence has also kept it closeted from global appreciation.

Ralph Russell, the legendary British scholar of Urdu literature, whose tireless efforts to explore the Byzantine layers of Urdu will always serve as a reference point for global Urdu-walas, once summed up the eternal dilemma of achieving a perfect translation of Urdu literature into English. He pointed out that the work of Indian and Pakistani translators suffered from a lack of command in either language. “The English-knowing products of what in India and Pakistan are generally called ‘convent schools’ have acquired their nearly (but not quite) perfect English at the cost of losing full command of their mother tongue,” he wrote in 1996.

This is not to say that translations of Urdu literature have not been accomplished. In fact, there are many 20th century writers whose works have been translated by competent men and women. Key examples are the translations of the short stories of Saadat Hasan Manto and Ismat Chughtai. Their poignant and non-conformist writings have found a wide readership in predominantly English-reading Indian middle classes and western readers attempting to understand the nuances of South Asia’s literary output. The contribution of The Annual of Urdu Studies – edited by Muhammad Umar Memon and published every year from the US – has been immense in this regard. Some writers and poets whose works have been translated include Abdullah Hussein, Patras Bukhari, Shamsur Rahman Faruqi, Rajinder Singh Bedi, Ghulam Abbas, Hajra Masroor, Premchand, Qudratullah Shahab, Intizar whose contribution and devotion to the translation of Urdu literature remains unparalleled and who has provided fine examples of literary translations, leaving out no major contemporary Urdu writer. His academic journal, The Annual of Urdu Studies, continues to publish translated works from Urdu every year.

Literary magazines are a great introduction to young and fresh voices in Urdu. One can observe a constant process of experimentation in language and expression. Short story writer Ali Akbar Natiq, one of Urdu’s most important new voices, and Mohammad Khalid Toor, who is critical newly- rediscovered voice, have been introduced to readers by Urdu literary magazines.

Such being the rich translation prospects in various genres, who will become the future translators of this diverse and important body of literature? I would like to think that in the coming years, these works will find translators among young Pakistani writers who aspire to write in English. Besides reading, translation is the best training for a writer. Those interested in writing about Pakistan and its culture must surely have an interest in the literature written in its local languages. When they mine it, they are certain to find things they would wish to share with those outside their culture. I put my money on it.

Husain, Shaukat Siddiqui and Muhammad Mansha Yaad.Also, numerous literary works written in other, mainly European languages, have been translated into Urdu.

Translators, in the second half of the 19th century, mainly focused on translating the works of English writers. In the first three decades of the 20th century, there was a blossoming of translations from the works of French, German and Russian writers. In the 1950s and 1960s, spurred by left wing radicalisation and an increased desire among the literati to know more about what is now known as the global south, there was a flurry of translations from Afro-Asian and South American literatures. In later years, European writers like Jean Paul Sartre, Albert Camus, Will Durant, Erich Fromme and Franz Kafka attracted the attention of Pakistani translators. Learned and accomplished translators such as Qazi Javed, Fahmida Riaz and Masood Ashar, among others, translated the works of an array of western writers, philosophers and political activists in those years.

Despite these efforts, translators have yet to negotiate and overcome the real challenge in capturing the amazing diversity and glorious eras of Urdu literature, high Sindhi and Punjabi prose and poetry and the subtleties of Pashto literature. Both medieval and modern – such are the labels we struggle with – literary writing in these languages is far less accessible and known in the global arena than it should be.

An exception has been the monumental work done by Annemarie Schimmel to introduce high Sufi poetry from areas which comprise Pakistan now to foreign readers. Yet, an enormous amount of work still remains, and needs, to be done.

Another exception is the recent rendering into English of the two perhaps most read dastans (stories) in Urdu literature. Uber-talented writer and translator Musharraf Ali Farooqi has taken up the daunting task of translating Tilism-e-Hoshruba – written by Muhammad Husain Jah, with its first volume published in 1883 – and Dastan-e-Amir Hamza, which was first commissioned as an illustrated manuscript by Mughal Emperor Akbar in 1562. In the realm of poetry, Ghalib has been translated into English by many, but great ghazals and poems by other poets who were either his contemporaries or wrote a few decades before and after him – like Sauda, Mir Taqi Mir, Ibrahim Zauq – are becoming inaccessible.

The story of Urdu is indeed tragic. The language has few owners in both India and Pakistan. As a result, most Urdu literature from the 19th century, or earlier, has succumbed to the vicissitudes of the subcontinent’s politics. In post 1947 India, Urdu has become communalised, rather ghetto-ised, synonymous exclusively with Muslims and Pakistan. The vast majority living in Delhi and Lucknow – once the epicentres of Urdu literature – cannot even read the language, let alone identify with the great Urdu poets and writers that both cities have produced. No efforts are being made to render their works in other local languages as well as in English — an exercise that may establish their rightful place on the literary map.

Compared to this, other Indian languages – like, for instance Bangla, Tamil and Malyalam have enjoyed a revival, with two-way translations of great literature.

In Pakistan, Urdu as a language faces yet another challenge. For decades it has been viewed as the language of the centre, the only national language of the ‘Islamic Republic’, even though it is the mother tongue of about 10 per cent of the country’s population.

Its official status has allowed literature in Urdu to gain preeminence, but at the cost of other local languages and regional identities, thereby becoming a source of permanent anxiety and discontent among the proponents of languages like Sindhi, Seraiki, Pashto, Balochi, Punjabi and Brahvi. The continuous tug of war between national and regional languages has meant that a huge volume of Urdu literature from past decades and even centuries does not get translated into English as it requires massive institutional effort – given its magnitude and the intricacy of its diction – which cannot be put together without creating linguistic controversies. Also, with English becoming a language that can aid employment and upward mobility, attention to Urdu and even proficiency in the language are waning.

The downside of this is that Urdu literature has become increasingly inaccessible to the urban middle and elite sections of society. Take, for instance, the case of the Urdu novel, short story, essay and travelogue — rich in variety and quality, but generally unknown to those who have the money and time to buy and read literary works.

For instance, the works of two great Urdu writers illustrate that because they are not writing in English, their literary expertise doesn’t attract the international hype that later works in English on similar themes have sought.

Qurratulain Hyder dealt with the same subject in her novel Gardish-e-Rang-e-Chaman that British writer William Dalrymple explored in his White Mughals a decade later. Arguably, the literary merit of her novel is far higher than that of Dalrymple’s. But when it came to local, regional and international reception, the latter did far better than the former could ever manage.

Hyder’s other great novels – Aag ka Darya and Akhir-e-Shab Ke Hamsafar – rival the globally acclaimed Nobel- laureate labels but have not been rendered into quality translations.

Daniyal Mueenuddin’s brilliant short stories, In Other Rooms, Other Wonders, have been noted for their lyrical quality and are acknowledged globally. But it was decades ago that Ahmad Nadeem Qasmi, the master of Urdu literature in the latter half of the 20th century, covered most of the same themes that Mueenuddin now does.

Qasmi captured the workings of rural Punjabi society in his sparse yet poetic style. Both Mueenuddin and his readers could have benefited from Qasmi’s stories had they been available in English, if not for anything other than the joy of comparing the writing.

So what is being represented as ‘Pakistani literature’ is but a partial phantom of the whole.

Except for Mohammed Hanif (his second novel, Our Lady of Alice Bhatti will be out in August 2011) and a few others, most Pakistani writers in English are not conversant with the nodes and traditions of local literature. Some would say that this is not an issue, but my argument is that this lack of familiarity with local literary heritage undermines the work of Pakistani writers in English which ends up demonstrating a degree of ‘foreignness’ when they venture to write about a society whose earlier nuanced and subtle representations they are unaware of.

But no one can fault these writers for their lack of knowledge about Urdu literature. The political economy of Urdu in Pakistan and the lack of institutional will, expertise and resources to render great Urdu writings into other languages, especially English, are reasons to consider. Unsurprisingly, most of the important work of transmitting Pakistani literature through other languages in recent years has taken place abroad. David Matthews and Rukhsana Ahmad in Britain and Frances Pritchett and Muhammad Umar Memon in the United States have produced noteworthy translations.

But there is so much more to do. As Russell put it, “the prospects are not bright … as in so many other areas of life, one must do whatever one can do and be content.”

Published in Herald July 2011

  • Arun

    Also write Urdu in Devanagari and increase the audience 10-fold.

  • Robert Smith

    Wonderful evocation of a language that attracts intense love from a tragically limited reading population.

    I have enough trouble reading in Devanagari but am coming to the view that appreciating Hindi requires also a serious exploration of Urdu.

  • Rehan Qayoom

    You’ve practically covered all good Urdu to English translations in this article. Urdu literature is a largely neglected field of studies per se let alone in the English language compared to, for example English or German or French or Russian or American literature and fast dwindling. This is arguably due to the dwindling numbers of the upholders or torch-bearers of the language themselves losing heart at it.

    If I may say so myself, as one reasonably fluent in both languages and familiar with their literary traditions I have translated Faiz, Aleem, and Parveen Shakir and some others into English. I tend towards calling my pieces, cautiously ‘Adaptations’ as I see them as poems in themselves. All of them I have been inspired into making.

    The Parveen Shakir ones will be published separately/a> but all others can be find in my book About Time: Poems & Adaptations 1993 – 2010.

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  • shama zaidi

    the stubborn reluctance to admit that hindi and urdu are indeed two halves of the same language has contributed to the demise of feudal-style persianized urdu, which my mother used to call” padhe likhe musalman mardon ki zaban”. we should recognize that ursu exists in two scripts nastaliq and devanagari just as panjabi exists in two scripts with differing registers in the written language on the two parts of panjab. the decline of urdu is also compounded by the fact that in pakistan the regional languages have not been given their own space. and unlike farsi there is not enough software in urdu.

  • Amil Khan

    I think the phrase “political economy” sums up a large part of the problem. Without Urdu speakers being a significant market to sell to or producers to buy from there are few cold, hard reasons to learn the language. The ultimate expression of this is the depressing fact that those young men and women destined to be Pakistan’s decision makers will likely never be as comfortable reading Urdu as they will in English.

    But Urdu is not the only language to suffer this. Many young Arabs speak Arab-lish (ie not good at either language). For all the religious-cultural and financial (oil) weight behind Arabic, it’s political economy that decides whether it is really worth learning. There’s a great short book called Whatever Happened to the Egyptians by economist Galal Amin that does a good job exploring this phenomenon in the Arab world’s most populous nation.

  • shama zaidi

    another point of interest is that while japanese and chinese and arabic and farsi are offered at the undergraduate level in many american universities indian languages including urdu are not.

  • Tahira Naqvi

    Shama, that’s not true. Urdu is being taught at many American universities at the undergraduate level. I teach it at NYU, it’s taught at Columbia, University of Wisconsin at Madison, UPenn, University of Virginia, University of NC at Chapel Hill, University of Chicago, George Washington University, UCBerkeley, and several others as well. In addition to this, there are programs now being run at universities across the country where teachers are being trained to teach Urdu, along with a host of other “less commonly taught languages.” Everything I’ve said about Urdu applies to Hindi as well. We have a large Hindi program at NYU. And we’re thriving.

  • Tahira Naqvi

    Raza Sahib, you have generously mentioned Fran and David Mathews as translators of noteworthy mention, but kuch khidmat Urdu kii ham ne bhii kii hai. And as for Qurratulain’s translations, she wouldn’t let anyone touch her work and decided to attempt “aag ka darya” herself. She was a great writer, but not a happy translator; hence the term “transcreation” rather than translation she chose to use for “River of Fire.”

    Finally I don’t agree with Russell: the prospects are not dim either.

  • Fawad Zakariya

    Raza, very important piece. Thanks for writing it. I think somebody else has mentioned it but the “political economy” point is the crucial one. So much of the decline of the language (particularly in Pakistan) is due to the steady decline of the state and its failure to educate or provide for its people.

    Ironically, the best Urdu writers of the 20th century achieved their stature because they were educated competently by the British and many of them were at home in multiple languages. No truly great Urdu writer has been born since 1947 and that is 65 years now. Compare that to the time period between 1900 and 1935 (every great or even the next tier post-Iqbal Urdu author was born during this time: Faiz, Rashid, Majeed Amjad, Manto, Qurratulain Hyder, Ismat Chughtai, Yusufi, Bedi, Ghulam Abbas, Ashfaq, Bano Qudsia, Ahmed Nadeem Qasmi, Meeraji etc. etc.)

    @Arun, Urdu should be published in Devnagri as well (as Hindi should be in Nastaliq) but frankly it will not grow the market that substantially. The vocabulary of most of Urdu’s classical prose and poetry will still not be accessible to even those who are very capable Hindi speakers.

  • Kamran Sarfaraz Baig

    Dear Raza Rumi
    Ur nigareshat(write ups)are highly commendable n have food for thought.

    I propose that the Department of Pakistani Languages at AIOU,Islamabad may motivate its M.Phil. n Ph.D. Scholars to translate fiction n poetry from Urdu n other pakistani languages into english to bridge the gap between East n West.

    They may also conduct orientation workshops n seminars in this context.

    Kamran Sarfaraz Baig